There are a few people that dislike the fact that I use questions in the text portion.
It IS atypical, and done on purpose, but not everyone enjoys the same thing. Still, I'm not going to change my way or writing for one or two people. Or Really, for anyone in particular.
It isn't that I don't want them to be happy, just that I really can't see how following the rigid rules of the publishing industry is going to help anyone become a better person. Or make a story better, all the time.
You know what I mean?
![Smile :)](./images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif)
So, if you dislike the way I write, I'm sorry that it's the case. It seems a very minor point to me, and is done to remind people that the person being show is a thinking being that has to figure things out. Yes, it really is strange, for third person imperfect, but hey, if you want normal...
It IS atypical, and done on purpose, but not everyone enjoys the same thing. Still, I'm not going to change my way or writing for one or two people. Or Really, for anyone in particular.
It isn't that I don't want them to be happy, just that I really can't see how following the rigid rules of the publishing industry is going to help anyone become a better person. Or make a story better, all the time.
You know what I mean?
![Smile :)](./images/smilies/icon_e_smile.gif)
So, if you dislike the way I write, I'm sorry that it's the case. It seems a very minor point to me, and is done to remind people that the person being show is a thinking being that has to figure things out. Yes, it really is strange, for third person imperfect, but hey, if you want normal...