Hi, finished the new books and loved them again, not much for re reading works in general, but it was nice to touch base with Keely again. It has been to long since I read the first versions, so no comment on if better or improved from the first, keep up the great work.
List of mistakes that I picked up,
Book 1 Even ? looks like it was meant to be Eve on page 53
DArla ? small a page 93
Mee ? maybe meet page 129
gan ? maybe gang page 135
and what looks like a break in structure on page 167
Book 2 I,t ? It page 15
ws ? was page 31
Book 3 keely ? Keely about 23 percent in place 614/2780 for some reason some books don't have page numbers for me.
anyway these jumped out at me on reading, not sure if it is me getting tired or dropping into the zone or you got cleaner or in your own zone, either way I look forward to the next books coming next month. Cheers.
kind regards Kurt.
List of mistakes that I picked up,
Book 1 Even ? looks like it was meant to be Eve on page 53
DArla ? small a page 93
Mee ? maybe meet page 129
gan ? maybe gang page 135
and what looks like a break in structure on page 167
Book 2 I,t ? It page 15
ws ? was page 31
Book 3 keely ? Keely about 23 percent in place 614/2780 for some reason some books don't have page numbers for me.
anyway these jumped out at me on reading, not sure if it is me getting tired or dropping into the zone or you got cleaner or in your own zone, either way I look forward to the next books coming next month. Cheers.
kind regards Kurt.