thanks for the advice. I'm thinking I will avoid posting on royalroadl for my next book. The comments have frazzled my perception of my work too much. At one point, after my character *literally beat a man to death with his bare hands*, people had commented that my character was 'too passive'. I spe...

Any suggestions on how to handle such 'off screen' scenes like that? In my book there is a duel, to preserve a consequence of the duel (besides the fight) which is a plot twist, the actual challenge too the duel is off scene. The reason to force a duel is talked about, and dealing with the duel, and...

cough. cough. litRPG. cough cough.

We Are Legion (We Are Bob): Bobiverse, Book 1
https://www.amazon.com/We-Are-Legion-Bo ... B01L082SCI

Get it. It's pretty awesome/

I feel like I started a fire storm! For the record. Those where criticisms I had heard from other people and rejected as wrong! :D I have some other ideas... Things that I started to write, but stopped, since the truth is they are way to dark for the average person. They aren't angst filled, but... ...

Not even remotely a mary sue. Even if he had been, a mary sue can still be part of an entertaining story. Take 'Vaz by Laurence Dahners' for example. Vaz is a Mary Sue in almost every way but one (the character is far over to one side on the Asperger spectrum), The point where he hacks the President...

"Yes, scientists have wondered about that one as well. Probably a measuring error. :)" Don't forget that there is no such thing as an absolute frame of reference for space/time, the universe doesn't really have a specific age. We can look at two points in space as either very close togeth...

I can confirm! it's all there!

(I am not a smart man) hehe

It doesn't seem to be listed on your amazon page.

If I search for it, i can find it (BUY!) but it's not on your page itself. weird.

I do know you can only hold up to ten books at a time.

i'm not sure about the getting it again minimum time (or if there is one).